ANC PASSAGE MASTER 12/8
I am the passage master and i think the most important part of the book so far is on page 56-58. This part of the book is important because the the Finney’s new neighbor Mr.Furtz unfortunatly dies. The finney’s found out about this tragic accident at dinner time. the finney’s were shocked. Mr.Furtz dies because he has a heart attack.The Finney’s were histerical. Dennis felt espicially bad because when he cut his knee Mrs.Furtz, Mr.furtz’s wife tookhim tothe emergency room. She took him to the emergency room after he egged her house.
December 11th, 2006 at 2:41 pm
You picked a good passage to talk about, but your comments are very repetitive. Watch your tense - you switch from present to past tense throughout your post. Also watch spelling and capitalization.